Sunday, January 16, 2011
empty pocket
In Anne Carson's "Plainwater" the queen-wolf, "her face empty as a pocket"
Simon's "rat-faced girl" has something despicable about it, but we also have Randall Jarrell's recipes in the library, Al Purdy's golden oaks in the fall [not far from his use of Blackfoot "sqws" - itself not a term used by the Blackfoot before the British, the English-speaking, in "Alberta" and not readily excused.]
That the empty pocket can offer no alms? But comfort in jeans is empty pockets.
In empty pockets, our hands find warmth.
No trusted poet with blue ink? A timid editor? I think of recent flaws in The Fiddlehead, The Malahat Review, a writer not knowing to use "burnish" for metal burrs on ground metal, that we do not pluck roses, we cut a stem - unless as a sorry euphemism.
In the first century, a pocket is itself an anachronism.
The effect becomes a flaw, unlike darkroom technique.
Or a pun: Lupa, "loupes" ["various magnifying lenses"] ?
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